The Princess
by Josie B.
The princess is fun.
The princess is cool.
The princess is pretty.
The princess is amazing.
The princess sleeps in a royal red bed.
During the day she plays on the swingset.
She sleeps in a castle that looks like crystal.
The castle's color is silver.
THE END
3 comments:
Josie I really liked your story! You used good imagery. I can just imagine what your princess looks like in her silver castle that looks like crystal. You are a good author and I'm sure the more your write, the better you will be! keep up the good work.
Josie, I also love your princess story. Ava is to bed right now, but I'm going to let her read it tommorow! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories.
Hi Josie!, I loved reading your story!! I can't wait for you to write more for me to read!!!
<3 Becky
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